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Skribentens bildNick Olsson

1985: Lament of the Great Sea [Chapter 2]

July 10, 1985

As the night progressed, the M/S Valka continued its journey across the Great Sea, but the calm was deceptive. The sense of unease that had settled over the ship intensified, feeding on the subtle disturbances that plagued the crew. What once felt like home now felt like a suddenly tightening noose.

It began with the whispers. At first, they were faint, indistinguishable from the sighing of the wind or the murmuring of the waves. But as the night deepened, the whispers grew clearer. They seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere, echoing through the ship's corridors, drifting into the ears of the crew as they went about their duties.


Ivan Petrovic was the first to notice. As the night deepened and the darkness seemed to press in from all sides, he stood on deck during his watch, the sea a black void beneath him. Suddenly, he heard his name, carried on the wind like a sinister caress. He turned sharply, his heart pounding, expecting to see a crewmate. But the deck was eerily empty, the only sound the relentless hum of the ship's engines. The whispers continued, weaving through the air like a ghostly chant, each word a needle of fear that pricked his skin and set his nerves on edge, growing louder and more insistent as the hours of the night stretched on.


"Who's there?" he called out, but the only response was the rustling of the sea breeze and the steady hum of the ship's engines.


As the night continued, more crew members reported hearing their names whispered. Some claimed to hear conversations just out of earshot, the voices low and filled with sorrow. It was as if the very air around them had come alive with the sounds of the past.


As Ivan sat up, catching his breath, the temperature in his cabin plummeted. He saw his breath mist in the air, and then he felt a cold, clammy hand brush against his cheek. He recoiled in terror, but there was no one there. The sensation of icy fingers lingered, leaving a burning coldness that seeped into his bones. He knew he was no longer alone in his cabin.


Moving Shadows

As the whispers persisted, the shadows began to move. During the day, the ship was bathed in sunlight, but as evening fell, the shadows lengthened and took on a life of their own. Crew members would catch glimpses of dark shapes flitting at the edge of their vision, vanishing as soon as they turned to look.


Pavel, the ship's cook, was slicing vegetables in the galley when he saw a shadow pass behind him. He turned sharply, knife in hand, but found nothing. Shaking his head, he returned to his work, only to see the shadow again, closer this time, almost as if it was watching him.


The shadows grew bolder, dark tendrils creeping into the corners of rooms, stretching like malignant tumors across the walls, and slithering down corridors. They seemed to pulse with a life of their own, a harbinger of the malevolence lurking just out of sight. They were always just out of reach, just beyond the light. The crew began to avoid certain areas of the ship at night, whispering among themselves about what they had seen.


Ivan was in the cargo hold when he noticed a shadow flicker behind the stacks of timber. He cautiously followed it, his flashlight beam slicing through the oppressive darkness, but found nothing. Just as he was about to turn away, the shadow reappeared, closer and more distinct. It morphed into the shape of a woman, her eyes hollow and her mouth contorted in a silent scream. Ivan stumbled backward, his heart racing, as he dropped his flashlight. The beam spun wildly, casting grotesque, dancing shadows across the walls.


The Chill of the Unknown

The cold spots were the next to appear. Random pockets of frigid air that seemed to come from nowhere, chilling the bone and frosting the metal surfaces they touched. The crew would walk through these cold spots, shivering as the temperature dropped suddenly and without warning.


Late at night, Yuri, the first mate, was inspecting the cargo hold when an inexplicable chill ran down his spine. He turned to see his breath misting in the air, despite the warm summer night. The cold enveloped him like an icy embrace, and for a moment, he felt a presence right behind him, a ghostly breath on his neck. He spun around, heart pounding, but there was no one there, only the looming, oppressive stacks of timber casting long, eerie shadows.


The cold spots became more frequent, appearing in the mess hall, the engine room, and even the crew's quarters. They left the men unnerved, jumping at shadows and flinching at the slightest sound. It wasn't just the cold that got to them—it was the feeling of being watched, of an unseen presence lurking just out of sight.


As the haunting continued to escalate, the psychological toll on Ivan and Captain Orlov became more pronounced. Ivan, who had always found solace in the endless expanse of the sea, now felt an oppressive weight pressing down on him. His connection to the ship, once a source of pride and comfort, had become a twisted bond of fear and dread.


Every shadow seemed to whisper his name, every cold spot felt like an icy grip around his heart. Ivan began to see the ghostly figure of the woman even in his dreams, her sorrowful eyes burning into his soul. He could no longer escape her presence, not even in the refuge of sleep. The once vivid dreams of open seas and bright skies were now replaced with nightmares of drowning in dark, frigid waters, the woman's cold hands pulling him down.


In the deep, haunting hours of the night, Ivan sat alone in his cabin, the dim light of a single bulb casting long, twisted shadows that danced on the walls. His hands trembled as he clutched a small photograph of his family, its edges frayed from years of being carried at sea. Tears welled in his eyes, blurring the faces of his wife and children, as the crushing fear that he might never see them again took hold. The whispers swelled, a relentless and insidious chorus of despair that echoed his innermost fears, wrapping around him like a suffocating shroud and filling the cabin with an unbearable, oppressive weight.


"Why are you doing this?" Ivan whispered to the shadows, his voice cracking with desperation. "What do you want from us?"


But the shadows offered no answers, only the chilling silence of the haunted ship.

Captain Orlov, too, was struggling to maintain his grip on reality. The experienced seaman, once a pillar of strength for his crew, now found himself questioning his every decision. The constant disturbances, the whispers, and the cold spots gnawed at his sanity, eroding his confidence.


Orlov spent hours pacing the bridge, his eyes bloodshot and haunted. He muttered to himself, replaying the events of each day, trying to find some logical explanation for the madness that had taken over his ship. The bottle of vodka he kept hidden in his cabin became his only solace, but even that offered little comfort against the creeping dread.


In the darkest hours of the night, Orlov stood at the bow of the Valka, staring out at the seemingly endless expanse of black water. The sea lay deceptively calm, a stark contrast to the tempest of doubt and fear raging within his mind, a storm that threatened to drown him in despair. He gripped the railing tightly, his knuckles white with the effort. The sound of footsteps approached, and he turned to see Ivan standing there, looking as lost and frightened as he felt.


"Captain," Ivan said softly, "do you think we’ll make it out of this?"


Orlov looked into Ivan's eyes and saw the same fear that haunted his own thoughts. He placed a hand on Ivan's shoulder, offering what little comfort he could. "We must hold on, Ivan. For the crew, for ourselves. There's got to be a way out of this madness," Captain Orlov's voice wavered, but he forced a semblance of strength into his words.


But even as he spoke the words, Orlov felt the weight of his own doubt pressing down on him. The ghostly presence on the Valka was growing stronger, and he knew that their chances of survival were dwindling with each passing day.


Growing Unease

The unease aboard the Valka grew rapidly. The once tight-knit crew found themselves snapping at each other over minor disagreements. As the night progressed, sleep became elusive as nightmares plagued their rest, filling their dreams with images of a sorrowful woman, her face twisted in anguish and rage.

Ivan, who had always found a connection to the sea, now felt trapped by it. The whispers, the shadows, and the cold seemed to follow him wherever he went. He could sense the presence of something malevolent, something that was growing stronger with each passing day. The ghostly figure of the woman haunted his every waking moment, her hollow eyes watching him from the shadows.


Captain Orlov, too, felt the strain. He watched as his crew, once confident and capable, began to unravel under the weight of the haunting. He knew he had to maintain control, but even he could not deny the fear that gnawed at the edges of his mind. He would find himself staring out at the sea, the dark waters reflecting his growing sense of dread.


As Captain Orlov rummaged through the old maps and documents in the storage room, he uncovered a weathered letter sealed in an ornate envelope. The letter, dated fifteen years ago, was addressed to a bride on her wedding day. It spoke of undying love and the promise of a happy future. The letter ended abruptly with a dark stain, the ink smudged as if by water. Orlov felt a chill as he read the final words, "Forever bound to the sea," realizing the connection between the letter and the apparition’s sorrowful presence.


As the Valka sailed deeper into the haunted waters, the disturbances grew more pronounced, the atmosphere aboard the ship thickening with dread. The whispers, shadows, and cold spots were only the beginning. The true horror that awaited the crew lay just beneath the surface, ready to drag them into its depths.


The crew's growing anxiety was a silent testament to the unseen force that had claimed the M/S Valka. They had entered a realm of sorrow and rage, where the past refused to stay buried, and the present was haunted by echoes of the forgotten dead. Each day brought them closer to a confrontation with the malevolent spirit that had taken hold of their vessel, and none could escape the fate that awaited them.

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